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Feedback For Alan on his Ad


Recently Alan had also made an advertisement on his blog so today I am going to comment and give my thoughts on his Ad. So looking at his ideas and development was clear and it clearly translates to to his Ad. Going through his process posts I got a clear sense of how he made the Ad. The end result delivered his ideas and thoughts for the Ad but it could have used more impact variables in his Ad. Good work from Alan and I hope he uses this to make better work.

Alan's Final ad: https://thef-x.blogspot.com/2022/10/the-final-advert-outcome-and-reflection.html


Comments

  1. Good that you posted this. What could Alan improve on or do differently?

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  2. Thank you for your post about my advertisement, I greatly appreciate your response!

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